Ran this in LTSpice. I left off the presence control as it should impact the output too much. As far as I can see, it seems to work OK. Lots of gain (no surprise). I don't think you need the 47uF bypass cap in the last JFET stage (10uF is probably enough). The modeled J201 JFETs biased at drain resistances from 15K to 33K, so 50K trimmers should be enough.
In the image below, the green signal is a 0.1 V, 800 Hz input signal, and the red is the output. As you can see, lots of gain, certainly well above unity.
It may help to put a simple JFET source follower buffer in front of the tone stack like the Dr. Boogey.
Hope this helps.