yes, it should work. :/
Are you sure you didn't forget the cuts under C1 and R5?
Also check the connections:
vol 3 to ton 3
vol 1, tone 1 and gain 3 to ground
Unfortunatly I've sold the one I built.
But I will build it again, just to make sure it's ok!
Fun to see that someone is building one of my layouts :)
I hope you get it working!
I will report back later when I've built it again.
EDIT: Built it tonight, and it works 100%.
Controls react as they should and it easily gets above unity.
I will post a videoclip tomorrow if I have time to spare.
cheers
/ Fredrik
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